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eanwhile Moscow was empty. There were still people in it, perhaps a
fiftieth part of its former inhabitants had remained, but it was empty.
It was empty in the sense that a dying queenless hive is empty.
In a queenless hive no life is left though to a superficial glance it
seems as much alive as other hives.
The bees circle round a queenless hive in the hot beams of the midday
sun as gaily as around the living hives; from a distance it smells of
honey like the others, and bees fly in and out in the same way. But one
has only to observe that hive to realize that there is no longer any
life in it. The bees do not fly in the same way, the smell and the sound
that meet the beekeeper are not the same. To the beekeeper’s tap on the
wall of the sick hive, instead of the former instant unanimous
humming of tens of thousands of bees with their abdomens threateningly
compressed, and producing by the rapid vibration of their wings an
aerial living sound, the only reply is a disconnected buzzing from
different parts of the deserted hive. From the alighting board, instead
of the former spirituous fragrant smell of honey and venom, and the warm
whiffs of crowded life, comes an odor of emptiness and decay mingling
with the smell of honey. There are no longer sentinels sounding the
alarm with their abdomens raised, and ready to die in defense of the
hive. There is no longer the measured quiet sound of throbbing activity,
like the sound of boiling water, but diverse discordant sounds of
disorder. In and out of the hive long black robber bees smeared with
honey fly timidly and shiftily. They do not sting, but crawl away from
danger. Formerly only bees laden with honey flew into the hive, and they
flew out empty; now they fly out laden. The beekeeper opens the lower
part of the hive and peers in. Instead of black, glossy bees—tamed by
toil, clinging to one another’s legs and drawing out the wax, with a
ceaseless hum of labor—that used to hang in long clusters down to the
floor of the hive, drowsy shriveled bees crawl about separately in
various directions on the floor and walls of the hive. Instead of a
neatly glued floor, swept by the bees with the fanning of their wings,
there is a floor littered with bits of wax, excrement, dying bees
scarcely moving their legs, and dead ones that have not been cleared
away.
The beekeeper opens the upper part of the hive and examines the super.
Instead of serried rows of bees sealing up every gap in the combs and
keeping the brood warm, he sees the skillful complex structures of the
combs, but no longer in their former state of purity. All is neglected
and foul. Black robber bees are swiftly and stealthily prowling about
the combs, and the short home bees, shriveled and listless as if they
were old, creep slowly about without trying to hinder the robbers,
having lost all motive and all sense of life. Drones, bumblebees, wasps,
and butterflies knock awkwardly against the walls of the hive in their
flight. Here and there among the cells containing dead brood and honey
an angry buzzing can sometimes be heard. Here and there a couple of
bees, by force of habit and custom cleaning out the brood cells, with
efforts beyond their strength laboriously drag away a dead bee or
bumblebee without knowing why they do it. In another corner two old bees
are languidly fighting, or cleaning themselves, or feeding one another,
without themselves knowing whether they do it with friendly or hostile
intent. In a third place a crowd of bees, crushing one another, attack
some victim and fight and smother it, and the victim, enfeebled or
killed, drops from above slowly and lightly as a feather, among the heap
of corpses. The keeper opens the two center partitions to examine
the brood cells. In place of the former close dark circles formed by
thousands of bees sitting back to back and guarding the high mystery
of generation, he sees hundreds of dull, listless, and sleepy shells of
bees. They have almost all died unawares, sitting in the sanctuary they
had guarded and which is now no more. They reek of decay and death. Only
a few of them still move, rise, and feebly fly to settle on the enemy’s
hand, lacking the spirit to die stinging him; the rest are dead and fall
as lightly as fish scales. The beekeeper closes the hive, chalks a mark
on it, and when he has time tears out its contents and burns it clean.
So in the same way Moscow was empty when Napoleon, weary, uneasy, and
morose, paced up and down in front of the Kámmer-Kollézski rampart,
awaiting what to his mind was a necessary, if but formal, observance of
the proprieties—a deputation.
In various corners of Moscow there still remained a few people aimlessly
moving about, following their old habits and hardly aware of what they
were doing.
When with due circumspection Napoleon was informed that Moscow was
empty, he looked angrily at his informant, turned away, and silently
continued to walk to and fro.
“My carriage!” he said.
He took his seat beside the aide-de-camp on duty and drove into the
suburb. “Moscow deserted!” he said to himself. “What an incredible
event!”
He did not drive into the town, but put up at an inn in the Dorogomílov
suburb.
The coup de théâtre had not come off.
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Building strategies that depend on others staying engaged in dynamics they can simply abandon.
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches you to spot when someone is performing power for an audience that's already left the building.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone keeps escalating a conflict even though the other party has clearly checked out—watch for the moment when engagement becomes performance.
Now let's explore the literary elements.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"Moscow was empty. There were still people in it, perhaps a fiftieth part of its former inhabitants had remained, but it was empty."
Context: Opening description of Moscow after most residents fled Napoleon's approach
This paradox captures how a place can be physically present but spiritually dead. Tolstoy shows that true emptiness isn't about numbers - it's about the absence of life force and community spirit.
In Today's Words:
The office still had some people working there, but everyone knew the company was done for.
"In a queenless hive no life is left though to a superficial glance it seems as much alive as other hives."
Context: Beginning of the extended beehive metaphor for Moscow's condition
This reveals Tolstoy's insight that surface appearances can be completely deceiving. What looks functional from the outside may be completely dead within.
In Today's Words:
From the outside everything looked normal, but anyone who looked closer could tell the heart had gone out of it.
"To the beekeeper's tap on the wall of the sick hive, instead of the former instant unanimous humming of tens of thousands of bees... the only reply is a disconnected buzzing from different parts of the deserted hive."
Context: Detailed comparison showing how the dying hive responds differently to stimuli
This shows how communities in collapse lose their ability to respond collectively. Instead of unified action, there's only scattered, weak individual responses.
In Today's Words:
When you tried to get everyone together for a meeting, instead of the usual energy you just got a few half-hearted responses from random people.
Thematic Threads
Power
In This Chapter
Napoleon's power becomes meaningless when there's no one left to exercise it over
Development
Evolved from earlier displays of military might to this moment of hollow victory
In Your Life:
Your authority only works when people choose to recognize it
Expectations
In This Chapter
Napoleon's shock at finding Moscow empty reveals how rigid his expectations were
Development
Building on earlier themes of characters' assumptions being shattered by reality
In Your Life:
When you're too invested in how things 'should' go, you miss what's actually happening
Community
In This Chapter
The beehive metaphor shows that true strength lies in living connections, not structures
Development
Contrasts with earlier scenes of vibrant social gatherings and family bonds
In Your Life:
Buildings and titles mean nothing without the people who give them life
Strategy
In This Chapter
Napoleon's entire campaign assumed Moscow would behave like other conquered cities
Development
Shows how previous military successes created blind spots in planning
In Your Life:
Past victories can trap you in strategies that don't work for new situations
Identity
In This Chapter
Napoleon's identity as conqueror crumbles when there's nothing meaningful to conquer
Development
Parallels other characters whose self-image depends on external validation
In Your Life:
If your sense of self requires others to play specific roles, you're vulnerable to their choices
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
What does Tolstoy's beehive metaphor reveal about Moscow's condition when Napoleon arrives?
analysis • surface - 2
Why was Napoleon so shocked to find Moscow empty, and what does this tell us about his expectations?
analysis • medium - 3
When have you seen someone prepare for a confrontation or dramatic moment that never materialized because the other party simply walked away?
application • medium - 4
How would you handle a situation where your entire plan depends on someone else reacting in a specific way?
application • deep - 5
What does this chapter teach us about the difference between conquering territory and conquering people's hearts and minds?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Map Your Expectation Traps
Think of a current situation where you're expecting someone to react in a specific way - maybe a difficult conversation you're planning, a confrontation you're dreading, or a dramatic moment you're anticipating. Write down what you expect to happen, then brainstorm three ways the other person could completely sidestep your expectations by simply not engaging as you predict.
Consider:
- •Are your plans dependent on others playing their assigned roles?
- •What would happen if the other person just... didn't show up to the drama?
- •How could you achieve your real goals without requiring specific reactions from others?
Journaling Prompt
Write about a time when you built up expectations for how someone would respond to you, only to have them react completely differently or not engage at all. What did that experience teach you about the difference between what we can control and what we can't?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 250: When Authority Breaks Down
Napoleon must now grapple with an unprecedented situation: what do you do when your enemy refuses to play by the rules of war? His next moves will reveal both his strategic limitations and the Russian strategy's deeper wisdom.




