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s Elinor and Marianne were walking together the next morning the
latter communicated a piece of news to her sister, which in spite of
all that she knew before of Marianne’s imprudence and want of thought,
surprised her by its extravagant testimony of both. Marianne told her,
with the greatest delight, that Willoughby had given her a horse, one
that he had bred himself on his estate in Somersetshire, and which was
exactly calculated to carry a woman. Without considering that it was
not in her mother’s plan to keep any horse, that if she were to alter
her resolution in favour of this gift, she must buy another for the
servant, and keep a servant to ride it, and after all, build a stable
to receive them, she had accepted the present without hesitation, and
told her sister of it in raptures.
“He intends to send his groom into Somersetshire immediately for it,”
she added, “and when it arrives we will ride every day. You shall share
its use with me. Imagine to yourself, my dear Elinor, the delight of a
gallop on some of these downs.”
Most unwilling was she to awaken from such a dream of felicity to
comprehend all the unhappy truths which attended the affair; and for
some time she refused to submit to them. As to an additional servant,
the expense would be a trifle; Mama she was sure would never object to
it; and any horse would do for him; he might always get one at the
park; as to a stable, the merest shed would be sufficient. Elinor then
ventured to doubt the propriety of her receiving such a present from a
man so little, or at least so lately known to her. This was too much.
“You are mistaken, Elinor,” said she warmly, “in supposing I know very
little of Willoughby. I have not known him long indeed, but I am much
better acquainted with him, than I am with any other creature in the
world, except yourself and mama. It is not time or opportunity that is
to determine intimacy;—it is disposition alone. Seven years would be
insufficient to make some people acquainted with each other, and seven
days are more than enough for others. I should hold myself guilty of
greater impropriety in accepting a horse from my brother, than from
Willoughby. Of John I know very little, though we have lived together
for years; but of Willoughby my judgment has long been formed.”
Elinor thought it wisest to touch that point no more. She knew her
sister’s temper. Opposition on so tender a subject would only attach
her the more to her own opinion. But by an appeal to her affection for
her mother, by representing the inconveniences which that indulgent
mother must draw on herself, if (as would probably be the case) she
consented to this increase of establishment, Marianne was shortly
subdued; and she promised not to tempt her mother to such imprudent
kindness by mentioning the offer, and to tell Willoughby when she saw
him next, that it must be declined.
She was faithful to her word; and when Willoughby called at the
cottage, the same day, Elinor heard her express her disappointment to
him in a low voice, on being obliged to forego the acceptance of his
present. The reasons for this alteration were at the same time related,
and they were such as to make further entreaty on his side impossible.
His concern however was very apparent; and after expressing it with
earnestness, he added, in the same low voice,—“But, Marianne, the horse
is still yours, though you cannot use it now. I shall keep it only till
you can claim it. When you leave Barton to form your own establishment
in a more lasting home, Queen Mab shall receive you.”
This was all overheard by Miss Dashwood; and in the whole of the
sentence, in his manner of pronouncing it, and in his addressing her
sister by her Christian name alone, she instantly saw an intimacy so
decided, a meaning so direct, as marked a perfect agreement between
them. From that moment she doubted not of their being engaged to each
other; and the belief of it created no other surprise than that she, or
any of their friends, should be left by tempers so frank, to discover
it by accident.
Margaret related something to her the next day, which placed this
matter in a still clearer light. Willoughby had spent the preceding
evening with them, and Margaret, by being left some time in the parlour
with only him and Marianne, had had opportunity for observations,
which, with a most important face, she communicated to her eldest
sister, when they were next by themselves.
“Oh, Elinor!” she cried, “I have such a secret to tell you about
Marianne. I am sure she will be married to Mr. Willoughby very soon.”
“You have said so,” replied Elinor, “almost every day since they first
met on High-church Down; and they had not known each other a week, I
believe, before you were certain that Marianne wore his picture round
her neck; but it turned out to be only the miniature of our great
uncle.”
“But indeed this is quite another thing. I am sure they will be married
very soon, for he has got a lock of her hair.”
“Take care, Margaret. It may be only the hair of some great uncle of
his.”
“But, indeed, Elinor, it is Marianne’s. I am almost sure it is, for I
saw him cut it off. Last night after tea, when you and mama went out of
the room, they were whispering and talking together as fast as could
be, and he seemed to be begging something of her, and presently he took
up her scissors and cut off a long lock of her hair, for it was all
tumbled down her back; and he kissed it, and folded it up in a piece of
white paper; and put it into his pocket-book.”
For such particulars, stated on such authority, Elinor could not
withhold her credit; nor was she disposed to it, for the circumstance
was in perfect unison with what she had heard and seen herself.
Margaret’s sagacity was not always displayed in a way so satisfactory
to her sister. When Mrs. Jennings attacked her one evening at the park,
to give the name of the young man who was Elinor’s particular
favourite, which had been long a matter of great curiosity to her,
Margaret answered by looking at her sister, and saying, “I must not
tell, may I, Elinor?”
This of course made every body laugh; and Elinor tried to laugh too.
But the effort was painful. She was convinced that Margaret had fixed
on a person whose name she could not bear with composure to become a
standing joke with Mrs. Jennings.
Marianne felt for her most sincerely; but she did more harm than good
to the cause, by turning very red and saying in an angry manner to
Margaret,
“Remember that whatever your conjectures may be, you have no right to
repeat them.”
“I never had any conjectures about it,” replied Margaret; “it was you
who told me of it yourself.”
This increased the mirth of the company, and Margaret was eagerly
pressed to say something more.
“Oh! pray, Miss Margaret, let us know all about it,” said Mrs.
Jennings. “What is the gentleman’s name?”
“I must not tell, ma’am. But I know very well what it is; and I know
where he is too.”
“Yes, yes, we can guess where he is; at his own house at Norland to be
sure. He is the curate of the parish I dare say.”
“No, that he is not. He is of no profession at all.”
“Margaret,” said Marianne with great warmth, “you know that all this is
an invention of your own, and that there is no such person in
existence.”
“Well, then, he is lately dead, Marianne, for I am sure there was such
a man once, and his name begins with an F.”
Most grateful did Elinor feel to Lady Middleton for observing, at this
moment, “that it rained very hard,” though she believed the
interruption to proceed less from any attention to her, than from her
ladyship’s great dislike of all such inelegant subjects of raillery as
delighted her husband and mother. The idea however started by her, was
immediately pursued by Colonel Brandon, who was on every occasion
mindful of the feelings of others; and much was said on the subject of
rain by both of them. Willoughby opened the piano-forte, and asked
Marianne to sit down to it; and thus amidst the various endeavours of
different people to quit the topic, it fell to the ground. But not so
easily did Elinor recover from the alarm into which it had thrown her.
A party was formed this evening for going on the following day to see a
very fine place about twelve miles from Barton, belonging to a
brother-in-law of Colonel Brandon, without whose interest it could not
be seen, as the proprietor, who was then abroad, had left strict orders
on that head. The grounds were declared to be highly beautiful, and Sir
John, who was particularly warm in their praise, might be allowed to be
a tolerable judge, for he had formed parties to visit them, at least,
twice every summer for the last ten years. They contained a noble piece
of water; a sail on which was to form a great part of the morning’s
amusement; cold provisions were to be taken, open carriages only to be
employed, and every thing conducted in the usual style of a complete
party of pleasure.
To some few of the company it appeared rather a bold undertaking,
considering the time of year, and that it had rained every day for the
last fortnight;—and Mrs. Dashwood, who had already a cold, was
persuaded by Elinor to stay at home.
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Let's Analyse the Pattern
The tendency to fall in love with an idealized fantasy version of someone rather than who they actually are, based on limited positive evidence interpreted through our own desires.
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches how to recognize when someone is telling you what you want to hear versus showing you who they really are through consistent actions over time.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone seems to perfectly match your interests or opinions too quickly—ask yourself what evidence you have of their character beyond their words, and look for patterns of behavior across different situations and relationships.
Now let's explore the literary elements.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"Marianne's preserver, as Margaret, with more elegance than precision, styled Willoughby, called at the cottage early the next morning to make his personal enquiries."
Context: Describing Willoughby's visit the day after rescuing Marianne
Austen uses the dramatic word 'preserver' ironically, showing how the family is already casting Willoughby in the role of romantic hero. The phrase 'more elegance than precision' hints that their romantic interpretation might not match reality.
In Today's Words:
The guy who helped Marianne - who the family was already calling her knight in shining armor - showed up the next morning to check on her.
"His person and air were equal to what her fancy had ever drawn for the hero of a favourite story."
Context: Describing Marianne's first impression of Willoughby
This reveals that Marianne is seeing Willoughby through the lens of romantic fiction rather than reality. She's projecting her fantasy of the perfect man onto him instead of getting to know who he actually is.
In Today's Words:
He looked exactly like the perfect guy she'd always imagined from romance novels.
"Marianne began now to perceive that the desperation which had seized her at sixteen and a half, of ever seeing a man who could satisfy her ideas of perfection, had been rash and unjustifiable."
Context: After meeting Willoughby, Marianne thinks her previous despair about finding love was silly
This shows Marianne's tendency toward dramatic extremes - she goes from complete despair to complete euphoria based on one meeting. Austen is gently mocking the intensity of teenage romantic feelings.
In Today's Words:
Marianne realized that being dramatic about never finding the perfect guy had been totally unnecessary.
Thematic Threads
First Impressions
In This Chapter
Willoughby's dramatic rescue creates an instant powerful impression that shapes how Marianne interprets everything about him afterward
Development
Building on earlier themes about snap judgments, now showing how dramatic circumstances can amplify their power
In Your Life:
You might find yourself making major decisions about people based on how they handled one impressive moment rather than consistent behavior over time.
Emotional Control
In This Chapter
Marianne completely abandons caution and rational assessment once her feelings are engaged, while Elinor maintains perspective even when attracted to Edward
Development
The central contrast between the sisters becomes more pronounced as their different approaches to feelings play out
In Your Life:
You might recognize times when strong emotions made you ignore red flags or rush into commitments you later regretted.
Social Performance
In This Chapter
Willoughby performs the role of romantic hero perfectly, saying all the right things about poetry and sensitivity to match Marianne's expectations
Development
Introduced here as a key element of how people can manipulate first impressions
In Your Life:
You might notice how some people seem to mirror your interests and opinions too perfectly, especially early in relationships or professional situations.
Class Dynamics
In This Chapter
Willoughby's apparent wealth and status (nice horse, leisure time for poetry) adds to his appeal and makes the Dashwoods less questioning of his character
Development
Continuing the theme of how economic position influences social relationships and perceptions
In Your Life:
You might find yourself more trusting of people who display markers of success or status, even when you don't know them well.
Sisterly Wisdom
In This Chapter
Elinor's growing concern about Marianne's rapid attachment shows how outside perspective can see dangers that the person involved cannot
Development
Developing the theme of how different personalities handle relationships and the value of having trusted advisors
In Your Life:
You might recognize times when friends or family expressed concerns about your relationships that you dismissed but later realized were valid.
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
What specific details about Willoughby immediately captured Marianne's attention, and how quickly did she decide he was her ideal match?
analysis • surface - 2
Why does Marianne interpret Willoughby's shared opinions about poetry and music as proof they're perfectly compatible in all areas of life?
analysis • medium - 3
Where do you see people today falling for someone based on limited information - dating apps, job interviews, social media, or first meetings?
application • medium - 4
If you were Elinor watching your sister or friend get swept away by someone they just met, how would you express concern without damaging the relationship?
application • deep - 5
What does Marianne's instant attachment to Willoughby reveal about the difference between falling in love with a person versus falling in love with an idea of what that person represents?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Create Your Evidence vs. Fantasy Chart
Think of someone you've recently met and felt excited about - romantically, professionally, or as a potential friend. Draw two columns: 'What I Actually Know' and 'What I'm Assuming/Hoping.' Be brutally honest about which column has more entries. Then identify three specific questions you could ask or observations you could make to move items from the assumption column to the evidence column.
Consider:
- •Notice how much of your excitement might be based on projection rather than evidence
- •Consider whether your assumptions align with what you actually need in this relationship
- •Think about how your emotional state when you met them might have influenced your interpretation
Journaling Prompt
Write about a time when you fell hard for someone's potential rather than their reality. What warning signs did you ignore, and what would you do differently now?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 13: Lucy Steele
Willoughby becomes a daily visitor at Barton Cottage, and Marianne's infatuation deepens. But Mrs. Jennings has some interesting observations about the young couple that might make readers wonder if everything is quite as perfect as it seems.




