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Volverán las oscuras golondrinas. [130]
BECQUER.
As Lucas had foretold, Ibarra arrived on the following day. His first
visit was to the family of Capitan Tiago for the purpose of seeing
Maria Clara and informing her that his Grace had reconciled him with
religion, and that he brought to the curate a letter of recommendation
in the handwriting of the Archbishop himself. Aunt Isabel was not
a little rejoiced at this, for she liked the young man and did not
look favorably on the marriage of her niece with Linares. Capitan
Tiago was not at home.
"Come in," said the aunt in her broken Spanish. "Maria, Don Crisostomo
is once more in the favor of God. The Archbishop has discommunicated
him."
But the youth was unable to advance, the smile froze on his lips,
words failed him. Standing on the balcony at the side of Maria Clara
was Linares, arranging bouquets of flowers and leaves. Roses and
sampaguitas were scattered about on the floor. Reclining in a big
chair, pale, with a sad and pensive air, Maria Clara toyed with an
ivory fan which was not whiter than her shapely fingers.
At the appearance of Ibarra, Linares turned pale and Maria Clara's
cheeks flushed crimson. She tried to rise, but strength failed her,
so she dropped her eyes and let the fan fall. An embarrassed silence
prevailed for a few moments. Ibarra was then able to move forward and
murmur tremblingly, "I've just got back and have come immediately to
see you. I find you better than I had thought I should."
The girl seemed to have been stricken dumb; she neither said anything
nor raised her eyes.
Ibarra looked Linares over from head to foot with a stare which the
bashful youth bore haughtily.
"Well, I see that my arrival was unexpected," said Ibarra
slowly. "Maria, pardon me that I didn't have myself announced. At
some other time I'll be able to make explanations to you about my
conduct. We'll still see one another surely."
These last words were accompanied by a look at Linares. The girl
raised toward him her lovely eyes, full of purity and sadness. They
were so beseeching and eloquent that Ibarra stopped in confusion.
"May I come tomorrow?"
"You know that for my part you are always welcome," she answered
faintly.
Ibarra withdrew in apparent calm, but with a tempest in his head and
ice in his heart. What he had just seen and felt was incomprehensible
to him: was it doubt, dislike, or faithlessness?
"Oh, only a woman after all!" he murmured.
Taking no note of where he was going, he reached the spot where the
schoolhouse was under construction. The work was well advanced, Ñor
Juan with his mile and plumb-bob coming and going among the numerous
laborers. Upon catching sight of Ibarra he ran to meet him.
"Don Crisostomo, at last you've come! We've all been waiting for
you. Look at the walls, they're already more than a meter high and
within two days they'll be up to the height of a man. I've put in
only the strongest and most durable woods--molave, dungon, ipil,
langil--and sent for the finest--tindalo, malatapay, pino, and
narra--for the finishings. Do you want to look at the foundations?"
The workmen saluted Ibarra respectfully, while Ñor Juan made voluble
explanations. "Here is the piping that I have taken the liberty
to add," he said. "These subterranean conduits lead to a sort of
cesspool, thirty yards away. It will help fertilize the garden. There
was nothing of that in the plan. Does it displease you?"
"Quite the contrary, I approve what you've done and congratulate
you. You are a real architect. From whom did you learn the business?"
"From myself, sir," replied the old man modestly.
"Oh, before I forget about it--tell those who may have scruples,
if perhaps there is any one who fears to speak to me, that I'm no
longer excommunicated. The Archbishop invited me to dinner."
"Abá, sir, we don't pay any attention to excommunications! All of
us are excommunicated. Padre Damaso himself is and yet he stays fat."
"How's that?"
"It's true, sir, for a year ago he caned the coadjutor, who is
just as much a sacred person as he is. Who pays any attention to
excommunications, sir?"
Among the laborers Ibarra caught sight of Elias, who, as he saluted
him along with the others, gave him to understand by a look that he
had something to say to him.
"Ñor Juan," said Ibarra, "will you bring me your list of the laborers?"
Ñor Juan disappeared, and Ibarra approached Elias, who was by himself,
lifting a heavy stone into a cart.
"If you can grant me a few hours' conversation, sir, walk down to
the shore of the lake this evening and get into my banka." The youth
nodded, and Elias moved away.
Ñor Juan now brought the list, but Ibarra scanned it in vain; the
name of Elias did not appear on it!
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Let's Analyse the Pattern
The Return Shock - When Everything Changes While You're Away
When you're away handling one crisis, others fill the space you've left behind, often permanently altering your relationships and position.
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches how to recognize when your physical or emotional absence creates space for others to advance their positions in your relationships and workplace.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone becomes unusually helpful or present during your busy periods - they might be positioning themselves to fill a vacuum you're creating.
Now let's explore the literary elements.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"Maria, Don Crisostomo is once more in the favor of God. The Archbishop has discommunicated him."
Context: Announcing Ibarra's return and reconciliation with the Church
Isabel's broken Spanish and confusion about 'discommunicated' vs 'excommunicated' shows how religious politics confuse ordinary people. She's trying to be supportive but doesn't fully grasp the power games at play.
In Today's Words:
Good news honey, the boss likes him again - wait, that's not the right word, but you know what I mean.
"Standing on the balcony at the side of Maria Clara was Linares, arranging bouquets of flowers and leaves."
Context: Ibarra's first sight upon entering the house
The domestic intimacy of arranging flowers together signals a relationship that's moved beyond formal courtship. The scattered petals suggest something beautiful being dismantled.
In Today's Words:
There was her supposed backup plan, acting like he already lived there.
"She tried to rise, but strength failed her, so she dropped her eyes and let the fan fall."
Context: Maria Clara's reaction to seeing Ibarra
Physical weakness reveals emotional turmoil. The dropped fan symbolizes lost composure and the collapse of careful social facades when real feelings surface.
In Today's Words:
She couldn't even stand up to face him - that's how messed up the whole situation had gotten.
Thematic Threads
Displacement
In This Chapter
Ibarra returns to find Linares has taken his place in Maria Clara's affections and social circle
Development
Introduced here as consequence of his earlier excommunication crisis
In Your Life:
You might see this when you focus so hard on one problem that you lose ground in other areas of your life.
Class Barriers
In This Chapter
The workers at the construction site treat Ibarra with respect regardless of his religious status, while the elite obsess over Church politics
Development
Continues the pattern of ordinary people being more genuine than the upper classes
In Your Life:
You might find that working-class colleagues judge you less harshly than management when you face personal difficulties.
Hidden Networks
In This Chapter
Elias appears among the workers but isn't on the official list, suggesting underground connections
Development
Builds on earlier hints that Elias operates outside normal social structures
In Your Life:
You might encounter people who seem to have access and influence that doesn't match their official position.
Emotional Distance
In This Chapter
Maria Clara can barely speak to Ibarra and appears pale and withdrawn in his presence
Development
Sharp contrast to their earlier intimate conversations and shared dreams
In Your Life:
You might experience this when someone you love becomes distant after you've been absent or distracted for an extended period.
Power Manipulation
In This Chapter
Colonial authorities have used Ibarra's forced reconciliation with the Church to weaken his personal relationships
Development
Shows how political pressure extends into private life, building on earlier themes
In Your Life:
You might see this when workplace politics or family drama forces you to choose between different loyalties, weakening your position overall.
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
What specific changes does Ibarra find when he returns from dealing with the Church, and how do the people around him react to his presence?
analysis • surface - 2
Why does Maria Clara seem so distant and uncomfortable when Ibarra arrives, and what role does Linares play in this tension?
analysis • medium - 3
Where have you seen this pattern in your own life - coming back from handling one problem only to find new problems have developed in your absence?
application • medium - 4
If you were in Ibarra's position, how would you handle discovering that your relationship had shifted while you were away dealing with other responsibilities?
application • deep - 5
What does this chapter reveal about how power and absence affect our most important relationships?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Map Your Absence Impact
Think about a time when you had to focus intensely on one area of your life - work, school, family crisis, health issue. Make two lists: what you gained by focusing there, and what shifted or suffered while your attention was elsewhere. Then identify one relationship or responsibility that you want to protect the next time you need to focus elsewhere.
Consider:
- •Consider both obvious changes and subtle shifts in relationships
- •Think about how others filled the space when you were unavailable
- •Notice patterns in what tends to suffer when you're focused elsewhere
Journaling Prompt
Write about a relationship that changed while you were handling other priorities. What would you do differently now to maintain that connection during intense focus periods?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 49: The Voice of the Hunted
Elias has urgent information that could change everything for Ibarra. Their clandestine meeting by the lake will reveal truths about the conspiracy forming against him—and force Ibarra to confront just how dangerous his situation has become.
