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The bashful Linares was anxious and ill at ease. He had just received
from Doña Victorina a letter which ran thus:
DEER COZIN within 3 days i expec to here from you if the
alferes has killed you or you him i dont want anuther day to
pass befour that broot has his punishment if that tim passes
an you havent challenjed him ill tel don santiago you was
never segretary nor joked with canobas nor went on a spree
with the general don arseño martinez ill tel clarita its all
a humbug an ill not give you a sent more if you challenje him
i promis all you want so lets see you challenje him i warn you
there must be no excuses nor delays yore cozin who loves you
VICTORINA DE LOS REYES DE DE ESPADAÑA
sampaloc monday 7 in the evening
The affair was serious. He was well enough acquainted with the
character of Doña Victorina to know what she was capable of. To talk
to her of reason was to talk of honesty and courtesy to a revenue
carbineer when he proposes to find contraband where there is none,
to plead with her would be useless, to deceive her worse--there was
no way out of the difficulty but to send the challenge.
"But how? Suppose he receives me with violence?" he soliloquized,
as he paced to and fro. "Suppose I find him with his señora? Who will
be willing to be my second? The curate? Capitan Tiago? Damn the hour
in which I listened to her advice! The old toady! To oblige me to
get myself tangled up, to tell lies, to make a blustering fool of
myself! What will the young lady say about me? Now I'm sorry that
I've been secretary to all the ministers!"
While the good Linares was in the midst of his soliloquy, Padre Salvi
came in. The Franciscan was even thinner and paler than usual, but his
eyes gleamed with a strange light and his lips wore a peculiar smile.
"Señor Linares, all alone?" was his greeting as he made his way to
the sala, through the half-opened door of which floated the notes
from a piano. Linares tried to smile.
"Where is Don Santiago?" continued the curate.
Capitan Tiago at that moment appeared, kissed the curate's hand, and
relieved him of his hat and cane, smiling all the while like one of
the blessed.
"Come, come!" exclaimed the curate, entering the sala, followed by
Linares and Capitan Tiago, "I have good news for you all. I've just
received letters from Manila which confirm the one Señor Ibarra
brought me yesterday. So, Don Santiago, the objection is removed."
Maria Clara, who was seated at the piano between her two friends,
partly rose, but her strength failed her, and she fell back
again. Linares turned pale and looked at Capitan Tiago, who dropped
his eyes.
"That young man seems to me to be very agreeable," continued the
curate. "At first I misjudged him--he's a little quick-tempered--but
he knows so well how to atone for his faults afterwards that one
can't hold anything against him. If it were not for Padre Damaso--"
Here the curate shot a quick glance at Maria Clara, who was listening
without taking her eyes off the sheet of music, in spite of the sly
pinches of Sinang, who was thus expressing her joy--had she been
alone she would have danced.
"Padre Damaso?" queried Linares.
"Yes, Padre Damaso has said," the curate went on, without taking
his gaze from Maria Clara, "that as--being her sponsor in baptism,
he can't permit--but, after all, I believe that if Señor Ibarra begs
his pardon, which I don't doubt he'll do, everything will be settled."
Maria Clara rose, made some excuse, and retired to her chamber,
accompanied by Victoria.
"But if Padre Damaso doesn't pardon him?" asked Capitan Tiago in a
low voice.
"Then Maria Clara will decide. Padre Damaso is her
father--spiritually. But I think they'll reach an understanding."
At that moment footsteps were heard and Ibarra appeared, followed
by Aunt Isabel. His appearance produced varied impressions. To his
affable greeting Capitan Tiago did not know whether to laugh or to
cry. He acknowledged the presence of Linares with a profound bow. Fray
Salvi arose and extended his hand so cordially that the youth could
not restrain a look of astonishment.
"Don't be surprised," said Fray Salvi, "for I was just now praising
you."
Ibarra thanked him and went up to Sinang, who began with her childish
garrulity, "Where have you been all day? We were all asking, where
can that soul redeemed from purgatory have gone? And we all said the
same thing."
"May I know what you said?"
"No, that's a secret, but I'll tell you soon alone. Now tell me where
you've been, so we can see who guessed right."
"No, that's also a secret, but I'll tell you alone, if these gentlemen
will excuse us."
"Certainly, certainly, by all means!" exclaimed Padre Salvi.
Rejoicing over the prospect of learning a secret, Sinang led Crisostomo
to one end of the sala.
"Tell me, little friend," he asked, "is Maria angry with me?"
"I don't know, but she says that it's better for you to forget her,
then she begins to cry. Capitan Tiago wants her to marry that man. So
does Padre Damaso, but she doesn't say either yes or no. This morning
when we were talking about you and I said, 'Suppose he has gone to
make love to some other girl?' she answered, 'Would that he had!' and
began to cry."
Ibarra became grave. "Tell Maria that I want to talk with her alone."
"Alone?" asked Sinang, wrinkling her eyebrows and staring at him.
"Entirely alone, no, but not with that fellow present."
"It's rather difficult, but don't worry, I'll tell her."
"When shall I have an answer?"
"Tomorrow come to my house early. Maria doesn't want to be left alone
at all, so we stay with her. Victoria sleeps with her one night and
I the other, and tonight it's my turn. But listen, your secret? Are
you going away without telling me?"
"That's right! I was in the town of Los Baños. I'm going to develop
some coconut-groves and I'm thinking of putting up an oil-mill. Your
father will be my partner."
"Nothing more than that? What a secret!" exclaimed Sinang aloud,
in the tone of a cheated usurer. "I thought--"
"Be careful! I don't want you to make it known!"
"Nor do I want to do it," replied Sinang, turning up her nose. "If
it were something more important, I would tell my friends. But to
buy coconuts! Coconuts! Who's interested in coconuts?" And with
extraordinary haste she ran to join her friends.
A few minutes later Ibarra, seeing that the interest of the party
could only languish, took his leave. Capitan Tiago wore a bitter-sweet
look, Linares was silent and watchful, while the curate with assumed
cheerfulness talked of indifferent matters. None of the girls had
reappeared.
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Let's Analyse the Pattern
When living a lie about your status or qualifications makes you vulnerable to control by those who know the truth.
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches how to recognize when someone has disproportionate control over another person through hidden knowledge or secrets.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone consistently gets compliance from others despite having no obvious authority - look for what invisible leverage they might hold.
Now let's explore the literary elements.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"To talk to her of reason was to talk of honesty and courtesy to a revenue carbineer when he proposes to find contraband where there is none"
Context: Describing Linares's realization that reasoning with Doña Victorina is impossible
This comparison shows how some people are immune to logic when they're determined to get their way. Doña Victorina, like a corrupt customs officer, will find fault regardless of facts because she has her own agenda.
In Today's Words:
Trying to reason with her was like trying to convince a crooked cop not to write you a ticket when they've already decided you're guilty.
"But how? Suppose he receives me with violence? Suppose I find him with his señora?"
Context: Linares panicking about how to actually challenge the Alférez to a duel
Shows how people who live by deception often lack the courage for direct confrontation. Linares can lie about his credentials but can't face the reality of what his lies have led to.
In Today's Words:
But how do I actually do this? What if he beats me up? What if his wife is there?
"It would be better if he forgot me"
Context: What she tells others about Crisostomo, though she cries when saying it
Reveals the painful gap between what we say publicly and what we feel privately. Maria Clara is performing what she thinks others want to hear while her true feelings show through her tears.
In Today's Words:
He'd be better off without me.
Thematic Threads
Deception
In This Chapter
Linares faces consequences of his fabricated credentials as Doña Victorina uses his lies to control him completely
Development
Evolved from earlier hints about his questionable background to full exposure of his vulnerability
In Your Life:
You might recognize this when someone who knows your exaggerations starts making unreasonable demands you feel you can't refuse.
Power
In This Chapter
Doña Victorina wields power through financial control and threat of exposure, while Padre Salvi hints at Damaso's continued influence
Development
Shows how power operates through knowledge of others' weaknesses rather than just official position
In Your Life:
You might see this when someone uses your secrets, debts, or dependencies to force your compliance.
Identity
In This Chapter
Maria Clara expresses conflicted feelings about her relationship, caught between her desires and external pressures
Development
Her internal struggle intensifies as she faces the gap between her true feelings and social expectations
In Your Life:
You might experience this when your authentic self conflicts with what family, work, or society expects from you.
Social Expectations
In This Chapter
Multiple characters navigate impossible situations created by others' demands and social requirements
Development
The weight of maintaining appearances becomes increasingly crushing for several characters
In Your Life:
You might feel this pressure when maintaining your reputation requires actions that go against your values or well-being.
Manipulation
In This Chapter
Doña Victorina's ultimatum demonstrates how desperate people become tools for others' agendas
Development
Shows the calculated nature of how vulnerable people are exploited by those who recognize their weaknesses
In Your Life:
You might recognize this when someone consistently asks favors right after you've made mistakes or need their help.
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
What specific threat does Doña Victorina use to force Linares into the duel, and why is it so effective?
analysis • surface - 2
How did Linares create the situation that now traps him, and what pattern of behavior led to his powerlessness?
analysis • medium - 3
Where do you see people today becoming trapped by lies they told about their qualifications, status, or achievements?
application • medium - 4
If you were advising someone caught in Linares' situation, what would you tell them about their options and the real costs of each choice?
application • deep - 5
What does this chapter reveal about the difference between borrowed authority and genuine competence in protecting yourself from manipulation?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Map Your Vulnerability Points
Think about areas where you might have exaggerated your abilities, connections, or achievements to others. Write down three specific examples where someone could potentially use your embellishments against you. For each situation, identify what the real consequences would be if the truth came out versus continuing to maintain the facade.
Consider:
- •Consider both professional and personal relationships where you might have oversold yourself
- •Think about the difference between temporary embarrassment and long-term control by others
- •Evaluate whether the people who know your truth are using it to make unreasonable demands
Journaling Prompt
Write about a time when you felt trapped by something you had claimed about yourself. How did you handle it, and what would you do differently now knowing the borrowed authority pattern?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 52: Shadows and Deception at the Cemetery
The title 'The Cards of the Dead and the Shadows' suggests supernatural elements or fortune-telling may enter the story, possibly revealing hidden truths about the characters' fates. Dark forces seem to be gathering as tensions reach their breaking point.
