Summary
Seneca responds to Lucilius's criticism of the philosopher Fabianus's writing style. Lucilius complained that Fabianus writes in a rushed, unpolished way that doesn't meet his expectations. Seneca defends his former teacher, arguing that Fabianus's flowing, natural style reflects his authentic character rather than carelessness. He explains that philosophers should focus on building character and communicating truth, not crafting perfect sentences for show. Seneca distinguishes between writing that 'tumbles forth' chaotically and writing that 'flows' naturally—Fabianus does the latter. He acknowledges that Fabianus's work lacks the dramatic flair and sharp wit that people often expect, but argues this is actually a strength. The philosopher writes to change minds, not win applause. Seneca compares Fabianus favorably to other great writers like Cicero and Pollio, noting that being ranked third among the greatest is still remarkable. He emphasizes that Fabianus's goal was always to share what he believed rather than impress his audience. This letter reveals Seneca's belief that substance should always trump style, and that authentic expression often serves truth better than polished performance. It's a reminder that in our social media age of perfect presentations, we should value genuine communication over flashy delivery.
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Seneca turns from evaluating others' work to examining the futility of making elaborate future plans. He explores why our daily reminders of human fragility should reshape how we approach tomorrow.
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L←etter 99. On consolation to the bereavedMoral letters to Luciliusby Seneca, translated by Richard Mott GummereLetter 100. On the writings of FabianusLetter 101. On the futility of planning ahead→483742Moral letters to Lucilius — Letter 100. On the writings of FabianusRichard Mott GummereSeneca ​ C. ON THE WRITINGS OF FABIANUS 1. You write me that you have read with the greatest eagerness the work by Fabianus Papirius entitled The Duties of a Citizen, and that it did not come up to your expectations; then, forgetting that you are dealing with a philosopher, you proceed to criticize his style.  ​Suppose, now, that your statement is true—that he pours forth rather than places his words; let me, however, tell you at the start that this trait of which you speak has a peculiar charm, and that it is a grace appropriate to a smoothly-gliding style. For, I maintain, it matters a great deal whether it tumbles forth, or flows along. Moreover, there is a deal of difference in this regard also—as I shall make clear to you: 2. Fabianus seems to me to have not so much an “efflux” as a “flow” of words:[1] so copious is it, without confusion, and yet not without speed. This is indeed what his style declares and announces—that he has not spent a long time in working his matter over and twisting it into shape. But even supposing the facts are as you would have them; the man was building up character rather than words, and was writing those words for the mind rather than for the ear. 3. Besides, had he been speaking them in his own person, you would not have had time to consider the details—the whole work would have so swept you along. For as a rule that which pleases by its swiftness is of less value when taken in hand for reading. Nevertheless, this very quality, too, of attracting at first sight is a great advantage, no matter whether careful investigation may discover something to criticize. 4. If you ask me, I should say that he who has forced approval is greater than he who has earned it; and yet I know that the latter is safer, I know that he can give more confident guarantees for the future. A meticulous manner of writing does not suit the philosopher; if he is timid as to words, when will he ever be brave and steadfast, when will he ever really show his worth? 5. Fabianus’s style was not careless, it was assured. That is why ​you will find nothing shoddy in his work: his words are well chosen and yet not hunted for; they are not unnaturally inserted and inverted, according to the present-day fashion; but they possess distinction, even though they are taken from ordinary speech. There you have honourable and splendid ideas, not fettered into aphorisms, but spoken with greater freedom. We shall of course notice passages that are not sufficiently pruned, not constructed with sufficient care, and lacking the polish which is in...
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Intelligence Amplifier™ Analysis
The Road of Authentic Expression
When we prioritize sounding impressive over being authentic, we lose our power to create genuine connection and change.
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches how to evaluate whether communication criticism targets effectiveness or just appearance.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone criticizes how you say something versus what you're actually trying to accomplish—ask yourself if changing your style would improve your results or just your image.
Now let's explore the literary elements.
Terms to Know
Efflux vs Flow
Seneca distinguishes between writing that 'tumbles forth' chaotically (efflux) versus writing that 'flows' naturally and smoothly. One suggests lack of control, the other suggests natural ease and authenticity.
Modern Usage:
Think about the difference between someone who word-vomits on social media versus someone whose posts feel natural and genuine.
Philosophical Style
A way of writing that prioritizes substance and character-building over flashy rhetoric or entertainment. The goal is to change minds and hearts, not win applause or impress people.
Modern Usage:
Like a therapist who speaks plainly to help you rather than using fancy psychology terms to sound smart.
Roman Rhetoric
The art of persuasive speaking and writing that was highly valued in Roman society. Romans expected dramatic flair, clever wordplay, and polished performance in public communication.
Modern Usage:
Similar to how we expect politicians and influencers to be polished performers rather than just honest communicators.
Character Building
The Stoic practice of developing virtue and wisdom through daily reflection and action. For Stoics, this was more important than any external achievement or skill.
Modern Usage:
Like focusing on becoming a better person rather than just looking good on Instagram.
Authentic Expression
Communication that reflects a person's true thoughts and character rather than what they think will impress others. It values honesty over performance.
Modern Usage:
When someone texts you exactly how they feel instead of crafting the 'perfect' response.
Substance Over Style
The principle that what you're saying matters more than how fancy or impressive your delivery is. Content trumps presentation.
Modern Usage:
Like preferring a nurse who really cares about patients over one who just looks professional but doesn't listen.
Characters in This Chapter
Seneca
Defender and teacher
Responds to Lucilius's criticism by defending his former teacher Fabianus. Shows his loyalty and his belief that substance matters more than style in philosophy.
Modern Equivalent:
The mentor who stands up for someone's character when others focus on superficial flaws
Lucilius
Critical student
Criticized Fabianus's writing style for being rushed and unpolished, showing he's focused more on presentation than content. Represents someone missing the deeper point.
Modern Equivalent:
The friend who judges a good teacher for not being entertaining enough
Fabianus Papirius
Defended philosopher
Seneca's former teacher whose natural, flowing writing style is criticized. Represents authentic communication that prioritizes truth over performance.
Modern Equivalent:
The straightforward coworker who gets results but doesn't play office politics
Cicero
Standard of comparison
Referenced as one of Rome's greatest orators, used by Seneca to show that even being ranked below such masters is still an achievement.
Modern Equivalent:
The legendary performer everyone gets compared to
Key Quotes & Analysis
"The man was building up character rather than words"
Context: Defending Fabianus against criticism of his writing style
This captures the core Stoic principle that developing virtue and wisdom matters more than crafting impressive sentences. Fabianus wrote to transform people, not entertain them.
In Today's Words:
He was trying to help people become better, not win a writing contest
"It matters a great deal whether it tumbles forth, or flows along"
Context: Distinguishing between chaotic and natural writing styles
Seneca argues that there's a difference between careless rambling and natural expression. Fabianus's style flows naturally because it comes from genuine conviction.
In Today's Words:
There's a big difference between word-vomit and speaking from the heart
"He has not spent a long time in working his matter over and twisting it into shape"
Context: Explaining why Fabianus's writing seems unpolished
This suggests that Fabianus wrote from authentic understanding rather than laboring over every word for effect. His naturalness is a strength, not a weakness.
In Today's Words:
He didn't overthink every word because he knew what he wanted to say
Thematic Threads
Authenticity
In This Chapter
Seneca defends Fabianus's natural, unpolished writing style as more authentic than crafted performance
Development
Building on earlier themes of genuine self-expression versus social performance
In Your Life:
You might catch yourself editing texts multiple times to sound smarter instead of just saying what you mean
Social Expectations
In This Chapter
Lucilius expects philosophical writing to meet certain stylistic standards, missing the substance
Development
Continues the theme of how external expectations can distort our judgment
In Your Life:
You might judge someone's intelligence by how they speak rather than what they're actually saying
Purpose
In This Chapter
Fabianus writes to change minds, not win applause—his purpose shapes his style
Development
Reinforces the importance of clarity about our true goals
In Your Life:
You might realize you're doing things to look good rather than to accomplish your actual goals
Character
In This Chapter
Seneca argues that Fabianus's writing style reflects his genuine character rather than carelessness
Development
Continues the theme that true character shows through authentic expression
In Your Life:
You might notice how your natural way of communicating reveals who you really are
Judgment
In This Chapter
Seneca challenges Lucilius's criteria for evaluating philosophical writing
Development
Extends earlier themes about questioning conventional standards of success
In Your Life:
You might reconsider what standards you use to judge whether something is valuable or worthwhile
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
Why does Seneca defend Fabianus against Lucilius's criticism about his writing style?
analysis • surface - 2
What's the difference between writing that 'tumbles forth' chaotically and writing that 'flows' naturally, according to Seneca?
analysis • medium - 3
Where do you see people prioritizing impressive presentation over clear communication in your daily life?
application • medium - 4
Think of a time when you tried too hard to sound smart or polished. How did it affect your ability to connect with others?
reflection • deep - 5
What does this chapter reveal about the tension between authenticity and the desire for approval?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Authentic Voice Audit
Choose three different ways you communicate regularly - maybe texting friends, talking to your boss, and posting on social media. Write a few sentences describing how your voice changes in each situation. Notice where you sound most like yourself and where you're performing for an audience. Consider what you gain and lose in each mode.
Consider:
- •Pay attention to word choice - do you use bigger words to sound smarter?
- •Notice your tone - are you more formal, casual, or trying to be funny?
- •Think about your goals - are you trying to impress, connect, or get something done?
Journaling Prompt
Write about a situation where you wish you had spoken more authentically. What held you back from using your natural voice, and how might things have been different if you had?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 101: Death Doesn't Wait for Your Plans
As the story unfolds, you'll explore planning too far ahead can be a dangerous illusion, while uncovering to live fully in the present moment instead of postponing life. These lessons connect the classic to contemporary challenges we all face.