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f course, the Stirlings had not left the poor maniac alone all this
time or refrained from heroic efforts to rescue her perishing soul and
reputation. Uncle James, whose lawyer had helped him as little as his
doctor, came one day and, finding Valancy alone in the kitchen, as he
supposed, gave her a terrible talking-to—told her she was breaking her
mother’s heart and disgracing her family.
“But why?” said Valancy, not ceasing to scour her porridge pot
decently. “I’m doing honest work for honest pay. What is there in that
that is disgraceful?”
“Don’t quibble, Valancy,” said Uncle James solemnly. “This is no fit
place for you to be, and you know it. Why, I’m told that that jail-bird,
Snaith, is hanging around here every evening.”
“Not every evening,” said Valancy reflectively. “No, not quite every
evening.”
“It’s—it’s insufferable!” said Uncle James violently. “Valancy, you
must come home. We won’t judge you harshly. I assure you we won’t.
We will overlook all this.”
“Thank you,” said Valancy.
“Have you no sense of shame?” demanded Uncle James.
“Oh, yes. But the things I am ashamed of are not the things you are
ashamed of.” Valancy proceeded to rinse her dishcloth meticulously.
Still was Uncle James patient. He gripped the sides of his chair and
ground his teeth.
“We know your mind isn’t just right. We’ll make allowances. But you
must come home. You shall not stay here with that drunken,
blasphemous old scoundrel——”
“Were you by any chance referring to me, Mister Stirling?” demanded
Roaring Abel, suddenly appearing in the doorway of the back verandah
where he had been smoking a peaceful pipe and listening to “old Jim
Stirling’s” tirade with huge enjoyment. His red beard fairly bristled
with indignation and his huge eyebrows quivered. But cowardice was not
among James Stirling’s shortcomings.
“I was. And, furthermore, I want to tell you that you have acted an
iniquitous part in luring this weak and unfortunate girl away from her
home and friends, and I will have you punished yet for it——”
James Stirling got no further. Roaring Abel crossed the kitchen at a
bound, caught him by his collar and his trousers, and hurled him
through the doorway and over the garden paling with as little apparent
effort as he might have employed in whisking a troublesome kitten out
of the way.
“The next time you come back here,” he bellowed, “I’ll throw you
through the window—and all the better if the window is shut! Coming
here, thinking yourself God to put the world to rights!”
Valancy candidly and unashamedly owned to herself that she had seen few
more satisfying sights than Uncle James’ coat-tails flying out into the
asparagus bed. She had once been afraid of this man’s judgment. Now she
saw clearly that he was nothing but a rather stupid little village
tin-god.
Roaring Abel turned with his great broad laugh.
“He’ll think of that for years when he wakes up in the night. The
Almighty made a mistake in making so many Stirlings. But since they are
made, we’ve got to reckon with them. Too many to kill out. But if they
come here bothering you I’ll shoo ’em off before a cat could lick its
ear.”
The next time they sent Dr. Stalling. Surely Roaring Abel would not
throw him into asparagus beds. Dr. Stalling was not so sure of this and
had no great liking for the task. He did not believe Valancy Stirling
was out of her mind. She had always been queer. He, Dr. Stalling, had
never been able to understand her. Therefore, beyond doubt, she was
queer. She was only just a little queerer than usual now. And Dr.
Stalling had his own reasons for disliking Roaring Abel. When Dr.
Stalling had first come to Deerwood he had had a liking for long hikes
around Mistawis and Muskoka. On one of these occasions he had got lost
and after much wandering had fallen in with Roaring Abel with his gun
over his shoulder.
Dr. Stalling had contrived to ask his question in about the most
idiotic manner possible. He said, “Can you tell me where I’m going?”
“How the devil should I know where you’re going, gosling?” retorted
Abel contemptuously.
Dr. Stalling was so enraged that he could not speak for a moment or two
and in that moment Abel had disappeared in the woods. Dr. Stalling had
eventually found his way home, but he had never hankered to encounter
Abel Gay again.
Nevertheless he came now to do his duty. Valancy greeted him with a
sinking heart. She had to own to herself that she was terribly afraid
of Dr. Stalling still. She had a miserable conviction that if he shook
his long, bony finger at her and told her to go home, she dared not
disobey.
“Mr. Gay,” said Dr. Stalling politely and condescendingly, “may I see
Miss Stirling alone for a few minutes?”
Roaring Abel was a little drunk—just drunk enough to be excessively
polite and very cunning. He had been on the point of going away when
Dr. Stalling arrived, but now he sat down in a corner of the parlour
and folded his arms.
“No, no, mister,” he said solemnly. “That wouldn’t do—wouldn’t do at
all. I’ve got the reputation of my household to keep up. I’ve got to
chaperone this young lady. Can’t have any sparkin’ going on here behind
my back.”
Outraged Dr. Stalling looked so terrible that Valancy wondered how Abel
could endure his aspect. But Abel was not worried at all.
“D’ye know anything about it, anyway?” he asked genially.
“About what?”
“Sparking,” said Abel coolly.
Poor Dr. Stalling, who had never married because he believed in a
celibate clergy, would not notice this ribald remark. He turned his
back on Abel and addressed himself to Valancy.
“Miss Stirling, I am here in response to your mother’s wishes. She
begged me to come. I am charged with some messages from her. Will
you”—he wagged his forefinger—“will you hear them?”
“Yes,” said Valancy faintly, eyeing the forefinger. It had a hypnotic
effect on her.
“The first is this. If you will leave this—this——”
“House,” interjected Roaring Abel. “H-o-u-s-e. Troubled with an
impediment in your speech, ain’t you, Mister?”
“—this place and return to your home, Mr. James Stirling will himself
pay for a good nurse to come here and wait on Miss Gay.”
Back of her terror Valancy smiled in secret. Uncle James must indeed
regard the matter as desperate when he would loosen his purse-strings
like that. At any rate, her clan no longer despised her or ignored her.
She had become important to them.
“That’s my business, Mister,” said Abel. “Miss Stirling can go if she
pleases, or stay if she pleases. I made a fair bargain with her, and
she’s free to conclude it when she likes. She gives me meals that stick
to my ribs. She don’t forget to put salt in the porridge. She never
slams doors, and when she has nothing to say she don’t talk. That’s
uncanny in a woman, you know, Mister. I’m satisfied. If she isn’t,
she’s free to go. But no woman comes here in Jim Stirling’s pay. If any
one does”—Abel’s voice was uncannily bland and polite—“I’ll spatter the
road with her brains. Tell him that with A. Gay’s compliments.”
“Dr. Stalling, a nurse is not what Cissy needs,” said Valancy
earnestly. “She isn’t so ill as that, yet. What she wants is
companionship—somebody she knows and likes just to live with her. You
can understand that, I’m sure.”
“I understand that your motive is quite—ahem—commendable.” Dr. Stalling
felt that he was very broad-minded indeed—especially as in his secret
soul he did not believe Valancy’s motive was commendable. He hadn’t
the least idea what she was up to, but he was sure her motive was not
commendable. When he could not understand a thing he straightway
condemned it. Simplicity itself! “But your first duty is to your
mother. She needs you. She implores you to come home—she will forgive
everything if you will only come home.”
“That’s a pretty little thought,” remarked Abel meditatively, as he
ground some tobacco up in his hand.
Dr. Stalling ignored him.
“She entreats, but I, Miss Stirling,”—Dr. Stalling remembered that he
was an ambassador of Jehovah—“I command. As your pastor and spiritual
guide, I command you to come home with me—this very day. Get your hat
and coat and come now.”
Dr. Stalling shook his finger at Valancy. Before that pitiless finger
she drooped and wilted visibly.
“She’s giving in,” thought Roaring Abel. “She’ll go with him. Beats
all, the power these preacher fellows have over women.”
Valancy was on the point of obeying Dr. Stalling. She must go home
with him—and give up. She would lapse back to Doss Stirling again and
for her few remaining days or weeks be the cowed, futile creature she
had always been. It was her fate—typified by that relentless, uplifted
forefinger. She could no more escape from it than Roaring Abel from his
predestination. She eyed it as the fascinated bird eyes the snake.
Another moment—
“Fear is the original sin,” suddenly said a still, small voice away
back—back—back of Valancy’s consciousness. “Almost all the evil in the
world has its origin in the fact that some one is afraid of
something.”
Valancy stood up. She was still in the clutches of fear, but her soul
was her own again. She would not be false to that inner voice.
“Dr. Stalling,” she said slowly, “I do not at present owe any duty to
my mother. She is quite well; she has all the assistance and
companionship she requires; she does not need me at all. I am needed
here. I am going to stay here.”
“There’s spunk for you,” said Roaring Abel admiringly.
Dr. Stalling dropped his forefinger. One could not keep on shaking a
finger forever.
“Miss Stirling, is there nothing that can influence you? Do you
remember your childhood days——”
“Perfectly. And hate them.”
“Do you realise what people will say? What they are saying?”
“I can imagine it,” said Valancy, with a shrug of her shoulders. She
was suddenly free of fear again. “I haven’t listened to the gossip of
Deerwood teaparties and sewing circles twenty years for nothing. But,
Dr. Stalling, it doesn’t matter in the least to me what they say—not in
the least.”
Dr. Stalling went away then. A girl who cared nothing for public
opinion! Over whom sacred family ties had no restraining influence! Who
hated her childhood memories!
Then Cousin Georgiana came—on her own initiative, for nobody would have
thought it worth while to send her. She found Valancy alone, weeding
the little vegetable garden she had planted, and she made all the
platitudinous pleas she could think of. Valancy heard her patiently.
Cousin Georgiana wasn’t such a bad old soul. Then she said:
“And now that you have got all that out of your system, Cousin
Georgiana, can you tell me how to make creamed codfish so that it will
not be as thick as porridge and as salt as the Dead Sea?”
* * * * * * *
“We’ll just have to wait,” said Uncle Benjamin. “After all, Cissy Gay
can’t live long. Dr. Marsh tells me she may drop off any day.”
Mrs. Frederick wept. It would really have been so much easier to bear
if Valancy had died. She could have worn mourning then.
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Let's Analyse the Pattern
When families disguise control as concern, using shame, guilt, and manufactured crises to force compliance from members who try to establish independence.
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches how to distinguish genuine care from control disguised as worry.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone's 'concern' for you comes with demands, shame, or ultimatums—that's control, not care.
Now let's explore the literary elements.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"Oh, yes. But the things I am ashamed of are not the things you are ashamed of."
Context: When Uncle James asks if she has no sense of shame
This shows Valancy's complete shift in values. She's no longer measuring herself by their standards but by her own moral compass. It's a declaration of independence from their judgment.
In Today's Words:
Yeah, I'm ashamed of things - but not the same things that embarrass you.
"Fear is the original sin."
Context: The moment she realizes what's been controlling her life
This is Valancy's breakthrough realization that fear, not love or duty, has been running her life. It's the key that unlocks her ability to resist the family pressure.
In Today's Words:
Being afraid is what really messes everything up.
"Mother doesn't really need me. Cissy does."
Context: Explaining why she won't come home
She cuts through all the emotional manipulation to the practical truth. Her mother has managed fine without her, but Cissy genuinely needs care. It's about real need versus manufactured guilt.
In Today's Words:
Mom will be fine without me, but this person actually needs my help.
"We know your mind isn't just right. We'll make allowances."
Context: Trying to shame her into compliance
This reveals how families often dismiss someone's agency by claiming they're not thinking clearly. It's a way to avoid dealing with the possibility that the person is making valid choices.
In Today's Words:
We think you're having a breakdown, so we'll forgive you if you come back now.
Thematic Threads
Control
In This Chapter
The Stirling family deploys shame, religious authority, and guilt to force Valancy back into her caretaker role
Development
Evolved from subtle disapproval to full-scale intervention campaign
In Your Life:
You might see this when family members suddenly become 'concerned' about your choices that threaten their convenience.
Fear
In This Chapter
Valancy nearly crumbles under Dr. Stalling's religious authority until she remembers 'fear is the original sin'
Development
Progressed from paralyzing terror to recognized weapon that can be overcome
In Your Life:
You might recognize how certain people's disapproval still triggers childhood fear responses that cloud your judgment.
Identity
In This Chapter
Valancy refuses to return to being 'Doss Stirling' who lived for others' approval
Development
Solidified from tentative rebellion to firm establishment of new self
In Your Life:
You might notice pressure to revert to old roles when you've outgrown them, especially during family gatherings.
Class
In This Chapter
Uncle James calls Valancy's work 'disgraceful' while offering to pay for professional help when she becomes defiant
Development
Revealed how class judgments shift based on power dynamics rather than actual values
In Your Life:
You might see how certain work is deemed 'beneath you' until you actually need the independence it provides.
Authentic Need
In This Chapter
Valancy distinguishes between her mother's manufactured need and Cissy's genuine need for care
Development
Introduced here as crucial skill for navigating manipulation
In Your Life:
You might need to evaluate whether someone's 'emergency' is real crisis or emotional manipulation to regain control.
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
What specific tactics did the Stirling family use to try to force Valancy back home, and why did each one fail?
analysis • surface - 2
Why did Valancy's moment of recognizing that 'fear is the original sin' become the turning point in resisting her family's pressure?
analysis • medium - 3
Where do you see this pattern of families using guilt, shame, and manufactured crises to control members who try to break free in modern life?
application • medium - 4
How would you distinguish between genuine family concern and manipulation disguised as concern when facing pressure to conform?
application • deep - 5
What does this chapter reveal about why some people become more valuable to their families only after they start saying no?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Map the Manipulation Playbook
Create a step-by-step breakdown of how the Stirling family tried to manipulate Valancy back into compliance. For each tactic they used (shame, religious authority, guilt, etc.), identify the specific vulnerability it targeted and why it didn't work this time. Then think about a situation in your own life where someone used similar tactics.
Consider:
- •Notice how they escalated from shame to authority to guilt when each tactic failed
- •Pay attention to how they suddenly offered 'help' only after she became defiant
- •Consider why they waited for Cissy to die rather than accepting Valancy's choice
Journaling Prompt
Write about a time when someone used concern or love as a weapon to try to control your choices. How did you recognize the difference between genuine care and manipulation? What would you do differently now?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 20: Dancing with Danger and Discovery
With her family's attempts at rescue thoroughly defeated, Valancy settles deeper into her new life at the Blue Castle. But her growing independence and happiness may soon face an even greater test than family pressure.




